http://clodia-metelli.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] clodia-metelli.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sermocinare 2010-11-12 09:56 am (UTC)

//The superhuman was regarding him with an expressionless face, small red dots dancing in his eyes like dying stars. //

That is very lovely. And the whole thing was vivid and delirious -- what a horrible ending! Great work. Thank you!

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